What do you think of this song i wrote?!?!?!?

walking down corridors, faces are alive
this is the story of street real five
never to forget the hauntings in the cement
the story of maria’s lament

Thoughtography, psychokineses, parapsychologists
it all seems falsible to the skepticists
twisted souls in the walls
the fear and the pain twisted in the halls

death as a medium
it only takes on eye to see them
destroyed by a pickaxe
they only multiply by the masses

truth is what lies here
just imagine the people that died here
people walk around like the world is okay
but, imagine all these twisted souls in dismay

what lies in the world fate
every keeps asking if its too late
people keep dying
they try to pretend there trying but….

truth lies in death
death is our fate
is it too late!?

truth is what lies here
just imagine the people that died here
people walk around like the world is okay
but, imagine all these twisted souls in dismay

its a very political song, and it was inspired by the faces at belmez

Cool! I mean, I would have to hear how it would be sung but it sounds cool!!